Saturday, 29 September 2012

prologue

this is the prologue to the book. its not long but I will be uploading chapters as previews. so read it and comment, what do you think I could do to improve it.

“May day…. May day this is captain Vetris of the 122nd cadian shock trooper regiment we are under attack, we need assistance. We are held up in a tower at the coordinates……………… emperor protect us”.
“Now there executing the rest of us, it looks like their performing some sort of ritual. Oh emperor why us why this god forsaken rock… oh shit I think they heard me. NO NOOOO!........ Ahhhh .” END RECORDING.
“The warp storm is getting stronger, if we are to save the 122nd we need to insert now before the storm overruns the entire sector” said admiral Kodar of the emperors hammer battle barge. “Sir the nearest vessel is an inquisition ship” said the navigator. “Damm contact the inquisition, they’re going to find out eventually”.


the picture was produced by Erasmus Brosdau (creator of the lord inquisitor movie)

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